帮我纠正找错误改写我写的几段句子

帮我纠正找错误改写我写的几段句子
I am so sorry that i can not accompany you everyday.I am so sorry that let you feel so lonely.Do you remember last Christmas,you make me feel so warm.But this Christmas,i am not by your side.All the boys are hanging(ING形式对不对) out with their girlfriends;(要不要加S)but you can't.Every time you do (did)something wrong,and the reason is because of the distance.Do you know how do i feel.Anyway,Merry Christmas.I hope you will wait me back to your side.
帮我把错误找出来.或者改写的更美点
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天才yy 幼苗

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I am so sorry that I cannot (并着写)accompany you everyday every moment and leaving you alone(下句还有feel,所以在这儿避免用feel lonely,而且alone会含蓄点).Do you still remember that we had a sweet Christmas last year and you made me feel warm.But I was not able to be around this time.I saw that those boys were hanging out with their girls everywhere on Christmans Day,this really reminded me of you that while others can be with each other,we cannot.We both know it is distance that sets us apart and it has become your main excuse for doing something inappropriate.I guess you know how I would feel.Well,Merry Christmas anyway.Wish that you will wait till the day I back to you.

1年前

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不悔的守侯 幼苗

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I am so sorry that I can’t accompany you every day and let you feel so lonely. Do you remember last Christmas, you made my heart feel so warm. But this Christmas, I am not beside you. All other are ha...

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candou8 幼苗

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6. 句子不够流畅,还有有些地方可以用别的方式更好的表达 另,如果不明白,可以HI我~

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