帮我的英语作文挑毛病Hello,everyone!My name's Zhu Yuxiao.You can call m

帮我的英语作文挑毛病
Hello,everyone!
My name's Zhu Yuxiao.You can call me Sophie.I'm twelve years old.I'm a minded girl.I'm from Class 3 Grade 6 and I'm a good student in our class.I do well in English.
I have a happy family.There are five people in my family.They are my grandpa,my grandma,my father,my mother and I.My father is a worker.He's very clever.He is always hardworking.My mother is a worker,too.And she is a good cook at home.My grandpa and grandma are both park keepers.They are always kind to others.I love them very much.
My ideal is to be a singer or a DJ.I like to be a Friend of the Earth,don't you?
Do you want to be my friends?
Thank you.