请那位老师帮我改改英语作文.Students of present age feel more pressure tha
请那位老师帮我改改英语作文.
Students of present age feel more pressure than before.On the one hand,students have to do so much homework and complete a large number of study tests ¬—— some of them are even difficult to adults.Students would feel tired to deal with them.On the other hand,as the development of the computers,more and more computer games are created.It seems that computer games are more interesting and relaxing than study.The most of students like games more than study.Some of them who can’t control themselves will be addict to the world of Internet.
Students of present age feel more pressure than before.On the one hand,students have to do so much homework and complete a large number of study tests ¬—— some of them are even difficult to adults.Students would feel tired to deal with them.On the other hand,as the development of the computers,more and more computer games are created.It seems that computer games are more interesting and relaxing than study.The most of students like games more than study.Some of them who can’t control themselves will be addict to the world of Internet.
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nowadays,students feel more pressure than ever before. On the one hand, students have to do so much homework and attend a variety of tests, some of which are difficult even to adults that Students would soon feel tired and frustrated. On the other hand, with the development of the computer science, interesting computer games have always been on the increase and they are readily available to most students . consequently, most of the students take to games ,a way to escape from the heavy pressure in study. what's worse is that some of them can’t control over themselves and get addicted to the world of Internet and never get out of it.
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