帮我修改一小段英文语法.I asked my best friend who is currently studying

I asked my best friend who is(was) currently studying in RPI,then he tould(told) me there were many aspiring students in RPI that offers(offered) him a great(perfect) learning atmosphere to achieve his career(degree).Also,the campus offers the students abundant equipments.So,RPI is a great choice.

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I have asked my best friend who (is currently) is studying in RPI now. (then he) He told(tould) me RPI (has) had many aspiring students who (that) offered him a great (或an excellent) learning atmosphe...

I asked my best friend, who is now studying at PRI. According to him, there hold many aspiring students in PRI, which provides him a great learning atmosphere to achiever his goal/to realize his dream...