求英语高手帮我英语短文改错下when my twentieth birthday came .I was not at
求英语高手帮我英语短文改错下
when my twentieth birthday came .I was not at home.In order to celebtate so an important day with my parent.I wrote them a letter,in which i thanked them for having raised me for twenty years,and express my love for them.late my mother told me that when she read the letter,tears filled with her eyes.But my farther appeared much cooler.after that,he read it lonely carefully,but then he put it away.i can imagine the scene clear because i know because i know my father well.Be a man with fer words,he prefers to show his love for me in silent way.
when my twentieth birthday came .I was not at home.In order to celebtate so an important day with my parent.I wrote them a letter,in which i thanked them for having raised me for twenty years,and express my love for them.late my mother told me that when she read the letter,tears filled with her eyes.But my farther appeared much cooler.after that,he read it lonely carefully,but then he put it away.i can imagine the scene clear because i know because i know my father well.Be a man with fer words,he prefers to show his love for me in silent way.
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共回答了10个问题采纳率：90% 举报
1.so an important day → such an important day
2.with my parent → with my parents
3.and express my love → and expressed my love
4.Late my mother → Later my mother
5.filled with her eyes → filled her eyes
6.read it lonely → read it alone
7.but then he → and then he
8.the scene clear → the scene clearly
9.Be a man → Being a man
10.in silent way → in a silent way
2.with my parent → with my parents
3.and express my love → and expressed my love
4.Late my mother → Later my mother
5.filled with her eyes → filled her eyes
6.read it lonely → read it alone
7.but then he → and then he
8.the scene clear → the scene clearly
9.Be a man → Being a man
10.in silent way → in a silent way
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