英语高手帮个忙啊啊啊啊啊!求改错!急!今天晚上就要! I have lots of hobby.Play compute

英语高手帮个忙啊啊啊啊啊!
求改错!急!今天晚上就要!
I have lots of hobby.Play computer,go fishing,play the football and go dance is very ineresting.Last night,my mother and me went to the cinema.We has a good time.Tomorrow we went to Beijing to have a good vacation.I come back next weekend.
谢谢~~
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sadwolf1 种子

共回答了21个问题采纳率：85.7% 举报

lots of hobby应该复数形式
.Play computer,go fishing,前面加上such as
play the football 改为play foot ball 球类运动一般不加the
go dance给为go to dance
Tomorrow给为第二天英语（时态错）
希望能帮助到你.祝你学习进步.(*^__^*) 嘻嘻

1年前

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snlun 幼苗

共回答了7个问题 举报

1.play--- playing , go--- going , play---playing go dance---dancing
2.去掉 football前的the ,
3.去掉 "is very ineresting"
4.has 改成have
5.went to 改成 will go to
6.在come back 前加will 改好啦,以后要注意前后时态一致啊~

1年前

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钟逢秒 幼苗

共回答了5个问题 举报

I have lots of hobbies. I am very interested in playing computer, fishing, football, and dancing. Last night, my mother and I went to the cinema. We had a good time. Tomorrow we will go to Beijing for vacation. I will come back next weekend.

1年前

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蒋辰辰 幼苗

共回答了163个问题 举报

第一句：lots of改成a lot of; hobby改成hobbies
第二句：Play go go改成playing going going；is改成are
第三句：me改成I
第四句：has改成had
第五句：went改成will go
第六句：come改成will come

1年前

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爱睡的牛子 幼苗

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I have lots of hobbies.Playing computer,going fishing,playing the football and dancing are very ineresting.Last night,my mother and I went to the cinema.We had a good time.Tomorrow we will go to Beijing to have a good vacation.I will come back next weekend.

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