（英语短文）下班后……下班后,我和姐姐一起去超市购物,我们买了蔬菜水果和鱼,六点半我们开始做饭,在七点一刻我们吃饭,吃完

下班后,我和姐姐一起去超市购物,我们买了蔬菜水果和鱼,六点半我们开始做饭,在七点一刻我们吃饭,吃完饭八点我们一起看电视,直到九点四十五我们各自回房睡觉
急,先谢谢各位了
After work,we went to supermarket and bought some vegetables,fruits and fish.At 6:30,we began to cook and had super at 7:15.
Finished super at 8:00.Then we were watching TV together till 9:45.In the end,we went to bed.

要用一般过去时.
I went to a supermarket with my sister after work. We bought some vegetables,fruit and fish.(vegetable是可数名词,另外两个都不是.)We cooked dinner at half past six and had it at a quarter past seven, ...

是一天的日记么。。。
i went out for shopping in a supermaket with my elder sister after work. We bought some fruit and vegetable and fish, and then started cooking at half past six. A quater past seven, we ...

After work,I together with my sister went shopping,bought vegetables,fruit and some fish.We made supper at 6:30 and had supper at 7:15.Then we were watching TV after supper at 8:00 and went to bed each other till 9:45.

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