本人写了一篇作文,怕有错误,1.Last weekend,I went to visit Old Henry .He w

Last weekend,I went to visit Old Henry .He was sad.He didn't want to do anything.Although I told jokes to him,he still wasn't happy.Then I went to a movie with him.The movie was very interesting.I also played the guitar for him .But I didn't play well .Finally,I found his dog .The dog was very cute.
Now he is very happy.Because he has a dog and family.
We should help the senior citizens.
没做太大变动,主要是加了些连词,使文章更加紧凑,还改了些错别字和语法错误,希望对你有所帮助.

基本语法是正确的，但句子间不妨用些连词，使作文更高级化。
Last weekend,I went to visit Old Henry .He looked sad and didn't want to do anything. I told him something interesting, but he was not happy at all.So we go to movie ...