短文改错 I heard I am going to be my aunt's bridesmaid(伴娘).I fel

短文改错 I heard I am going to be my aunt's bridesmaid(伴娘).I felt so exciting that I didn't sleep well that night after my aunt' wedding day.Although felt tired I got up early the next morning and went to my aunt's house to get dressing.Having put my blue dress,I carried a bunch of flower.My aunt wore a white dress,that made her very beautiful.Following my aunt and my father,I entered into the church.Everybody were smiling.After the wedding,I left the church happy.
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linshouyan 幼苗

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I heard I am(1、改为was) going to be my aunt's bridesmaid(伴娘).I felt so exciting(2、改为excited) that I didn't sleep well that night after(3、改为before) my aunt' wedding day.Although felt tired,I got up early the next morning and went to my aunt's house to get dressing(4、改为dressed).Having put (5、加上on) my blue dress,I carried a bunch of flower(6、改为flowers).My aunt wore a white dress,that(7、改为which) made her very beautiful.Following my aunt and my father,I entered into(8、去掉into) the church.Everybody were(9、改为was) smiling.After the wedding,I left the church happy(10、改为happily).

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fenhongse 幼苗

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am改成was
exciting改成excited
after改成before
aunt'改成aunt's
felt前加I
dressing改成dressed
put my blue dress改成put my blue dress on
that改成which
were改成was
happy改成happily

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你曾对我说 幼苗

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你好对应的行数依次是1.:am改成was,
exciting改成excited
2.after改成 before
felt改成 feeling
3.dressing改成dressed
put 后面加on
4.that 改成which
into去掉
5.were改成was
happily

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