英语作文的修改 (内容稍微变可以)
英语作文的修改 (内容稍微变可以)
多用first,after,then,when,after that 等词
July 15th was special and hard day to me.Because is my birthday.On that day.I work up at 9:00.I washed my face and bushed my teeth,after my friends came to my home and congatulated my birthday with me together then we went to boring but I played it first time so I can'tvery well Next we went to my friend Chinase restaurant at 2:00.Because they held a my birthday party .They sent me a lot of nice presents I wass very happy.We sang songs played games and danced afterwe went to park at 9:00.We displayed firework.It was very beautiful.
I went home at23.30.l was very tired but l was very happy.So l couldn't sleep soon.
l realized that everyday could be as happy as birthday since people around mee all love me