英语改错 急 How warmly the word "home" is to us!Everyone has his

英语改错 急
How warmly the word "home" is to us!Everyone has his and her home full of love.Homes can shelter us for wind.Whatever difficulties we meet,we often want to come back home for help.Homea are places for parking.When we are tiring from studying or working,home is the first word appearingin our minds so we can have a good rest at home.When we feel puzzled and hopeful just like struggling in the desert,homes were like drop of water to inspire us to survive .In a word,homes offer us help when we are in the trouble;homes give us courage when we are afraid;homes present me self-confidence when we are lost.
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第3行 第二个为homes
第四行appearing in our minds（有个空格）