wanghuiato
幼苗
共回答了20个问题采纳率:85% 举报
1. 可以,但此处你要把hand in 改为 handed in.
2. 注意专有名词的书写.Jiing 不符合汉语拼音,请注意正确城市.我姑且改成Jining. 原句可以说成:I was born in Jining City, Shandong Province, on 16th Jan. 1977.
3. 时态有问题.要改成:
Which hotel did you live when /while you travelled in Dali City?
I have been to Dali three times and I stayed at Seven Days Hotel each time.
在英语中两位数以内的数词通常写单词.
4. 预订宾馆的动作发生在过去,可用一般过去时.I reserved at Seven Days Hotel for 3 days before I left my home.
5. I have hauled the heavy suitcase up the stairs slowly and hardly before he got back home.
此句时态有误.before 从句用了一般过去时,主句不能用现在完成时.可以把 before he got back home 从句改为一个词 now.
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