A disabled person who wanted to go shopping in this city wil

A disabled person who wanted to go shopping in this city will find difficult to
do so.If the person has serious visual problems,finding the store is almost
possible. The signs are small and difficult to see,or all the streets is not
marked to help someone who is blind. If the person is from a wheelchair,he or
she will not be able to get into the stores,because the floor is high than the
sidewalk. Anyone who go in or out of must go through a narrow gate. Inside the
store,the passages are not wider enough for a wheelchair.
zhangzhongtx 1年前 已收到6个回答 举报

YANG34168 春芽

共回答了13个问题采纳率:92.3% 举报

1.wanted改为wants
2.find 后面加 it
3.finding the store 的the改为a
4.possible 改为 impossible
5.or all the streets 的or改为while
6.all the streets is not 的is 改为are
7.high改为higher
8.Anyone who go in的go改为goes
9.in or out of 后面加a store
10.wider改为wide

1年前

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苏菲的移动鱼缸 幼苗

共回答了348个问题 举报

调整(修正)如下,括号示——

A disabled person who (wants) to go shopping in this city will find (it) difficult to do so.

  • 全文时态,一般现在时,故wants;find sth/sb.+adj+to do sth.,缺形*式宾*语it

If the person has serious visual problems, finding (a可加可不加) store is almost (impossible).

  • 肯定改否定,符合上下文

The signs are small and difficult to see, (while) all the streets (are) not marked to help (the one或someone) who is blind.

  • 单复数、调整

If the person is (in) a wheelchair, he or she will not be able to get into the stores, because the floor is (higher) than the side walk.

  • 坐轮椅,in wheelchair

  • than前形容词用比较级,higher

Anyone who (goes) (into) or out of (the store) must (pass或go) through a narrow gate.

  • anyone视为第3人称,故go→goes

  • out of,后接宾语,联系上下文,系the store

(In或Inside) the store, the passages are not (wide) enough for a wheelchair.

  • wide,形容词原型,足矣,无需比较级

供参

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zymkris 幼苗

共回答了101个问题 举报

wanted变wants.difficult前加it.possible变impossible.high变higher.go变goes。wider变wide

1年前

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Ruthsky 幼苗

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find IT diffricult,IMpossible,ARE not marked,IN a wheelchair,highER,who goES in,WIDE enough

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潮-E网情深 幼苗

共回答了457个问题 举报

答案收回,告辞。

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leavalucks 幼苗

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find difficult 之间加 it

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