请你用first then next after that finally来描述你昨天做过的事.

Yesterday I went shopping,I bought a lot of things.First,I made a list of the things I need to buy.Then,I went out,took a bus,and arrived at Walmart.Next,I went in,and took a shopping basket.After that,I found the things according to my list.Finally,I bouthgt all things,I was so happy!
是上面那个不行吗 这样呢
Yesterday I had a good day.
First,I got up early,that made me feel fresh.
Then I had a tasty breakfast.I enjoyed it a lot.
Next I went shoping,and I bought a lot of things.
After that,I came back home,and watched TV while having supper.
Finally,I washed the dishes,and my mom praised me.

Yesterday I had very happy day.
First,I went to the fishing.
Then I had a picnic on the park.
Next I played the piano.
After that, I did my homework.
Finally I surfed the Internet.
我想的粉辛苦滴、评下我呗、我自己也刚写完..