英语短文改错 学的好的达人 帮帮忙啊 一共10处 请一一指出啊 先谢谢了啊

英语短文改错 学的好的达人 帮帮忙啊 一共10处 请一一指出啊 先谢谢了啊
Dear Mary,
I am writing to ask for your advice on how to get
along my roommate Judy. Though I have tired to
asjusting myself to her habits,I find it really
difficult to live in a room with a person who have so
many bad habits. Judy is a girl whom is quite wild
and always makes a noisy while we are sleeping.
what＇s more,she always drops litter on the
ground,with which I feel really boring.
I have tried my best to talk with her many time
and help her get rid of these bad habits and develop
new ones. Sobefore long she goes back to it. So I am
writing to ask for your help.
Looking forward to receive your early reply!
Yours
Lily