下面这段英文,有哪些语法和词汇等方面的问题,请朋友多指教,

下面这段英文,有哪些语法和词汇等方面的问题,请朋友多指教,
Many people not only Speak Chinese,but also hope to speak other language.They often recite a lot of words and many paragraphs.How to release yourself and raise efficiency of your studying?How to help your English reach an intermediate or advance level?It’s hard to recite many unrelated words.It’s easy to recite related and alike words.If you hang on long enough,you will succeed.It’s like a withered tree comes to life again.It’s also like a rat escapes form prison.