求帮忙看看这段英文有没有语法错误!这是我刚写的作文,英语学渣伤不起〒_〒跪求各路大神帮助!An incident hap

求帮忙看看这段英文有没有语法错误!这是我刚写的作文,英语学渣伤不起〒_〒跪求各路大神帮助!An incident happened on my way to school changed me alot.Yesterday morning,l run to the underground in a hurry.But all of a sudden,l frogot to take the transportant card ang l had no money.That is very terrible.Later,a good girl brought one card for me.I thank her very much.However,she was disappeared soon quickly.For her friendly behaviour,l did not late for school.I still remember her words,'It's doesn't matter.' From this thing which is filled with kindess l know that love can be found everywhere.As a senior high school student,we should try our best to make the world more beautiful.
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还可以 给你简单 修改一下 语法错误
An incident that happened on my way to school has changed me a lot.
Yesterday morning,l hurried to the underground ,but all of a sudden l remembered i frogot to take the Public Transportant Card with me and it was even worse that l had no money.That was very terrible.Later,a good girl swiped the card for me.I thanked her very much.However,she disappeared quickly.Because of her help,l was not late for school.I still remember her words,'It's doesn't matter.' From this thing which is filled with kindess l know that love can be found everywhere.As senior high school students,we should try our best to make the world more beautiful.

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芋艿儿 幼苗

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and 不是ang ...have no money ,it is terrible …错很多,基本上要全部重写

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