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楼上的， 你的作文是从一个爸爸的角度写的。。。
Should the school time be extended
By Li Hua
Many shcool teachers have questioned about the idea of extending school time. Extending school time for middle school kids not only adds more pressure but also cutted their free time. Being a middle school student, one has to face tremendous amount of homework everyday. Not to mention how little fun time they obtain daily. It would be unreasonbale for the teachers to extend class period and make the students suffer. In conclusion, it is great that the students learn more as the time lengthen, but it would not be benefited as the student will be too tired to learn.

正确的表达是Longer School Days
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Is It Time For Longer School Days?
by Diane Trautman
Should kids spend more time in school each day? Should the school year be extended?
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