求几篇满分英语作文,可以适用于任何题目的

Dear Sir/Madame,
I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.
As a student at Oxford University,I’d like to know if you have any special price for students.As for the money you charge,does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed?What about lunch?Is it included?Or do I need to bring along my own food?
How long will the tour last?Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day,I’d like to know the time to return.Besides,is there any time for shopping?I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.
Yours,
Li Hua
本文是根据画面的提示来写一封电子邮件.作者在文章中首先把握了全部的要点,叙述较为完整;其次,作者运用一些过渡句和衔接词将文章串联,意思连贯.文章中采用了第一人称和一般现在时,这是值得肯定的地方.
Dear Amy,
I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China.I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain.But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future.So,stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will win.It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive.So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you.In that way,you will get enough money for you to be cured.Hope you can be well soon.
Yours,
　　Li Hua
本文依照要求,涵盖了所有要点.文章使用了高中常见的句式,如I?m sorry to hear that...,It is reported that...等,都比较好.作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章,行文自然而通顺,值得学习.