求一篇大学英语作文《Can we change our fates》高手帮个忙～

Different people have different views on whether we can change our fates or not.Some people prefer that our fates lin in our own hands,and we can control them with our determination and efforts.Others tend to believe that fate is determined by God.As to me,I agree with the frist statement.
Of course,sometimes something unexpected usually occurs.For example,a healthy yong man may suffer a traffic accident and lose his legs in a sudden.But it doesn't mean that he can do nothing to change his miserable fortune.The following reasons can account for my preference.
The main reason is that our human being have the intelligence and ambition which enable us to conquer difficulties.A good example to illustrate is that many a hero,such as Zhang haidi,has succeeded in fighting against her fate.For another,God only helps those who help themselves.From the foregoing,we should be confident in and faithful to ourselves,no matter what happens.