高中英语作文修改 A boy who had left his home for years
高中英语作文修改 A boy who had left his home for years
高中英语作文修改
A boy who had left his home for years because of a family quarrel set his parents a letter that tie a white ribbon on tree if they welcome him back.Finally he saw hinders of white ribbons which showed his parents' welcome.
After reading this story, I feel the whole-hearted love of the boy's parents,which makes me deeply moved.Child is a treasure in parents' eyes.parents can tolerate all child's mistakes but can not lose their child,thus how could we child hurt our parents?
Many days ago,I unintentionally noticed a news that a 63 years old American father helps his handicapped son finsihing global travel. At first I was confused how could an old father manage such an impossible work.However I knew the answer from the father's firm eyes,which likes telling me"for father's love,everything is possible".
As we all know"Father love to be hill",Indeed father's love likes a mountain--deep and silent.Although father seldom speaks his love out, he always there when we need him.He likes a harbor when coming the storm,likes a handkerchief when weeping, likes a map when losing the way. He is our guardian angel.
Love our parents.Don't forget they already growing old while we too busy growing up.
1.是第二部分写作任务的
2.我是高三党,这25分作文一般只能得16分左右,帮帮挑一下语病还有提示一下该在哪方面提高吧.
3.宾语从句中的that能省略调吗?
高中英语作文修改
A boy who had left his home for years because of a family quarrel set his parents a letter that tie a white ribbon on tree if they welcome him back.Finally he saw hinders of white ribbons which showed his parents' welcome.
After reading this story, I feel the whole-hearted love of the boy's parents,which makes me deeply moved.Child is a treasure in parents' eyes.parents can tolerate all child's mistakes but can not lose their child,thus how could we child hurt our parents?
Many days ago,I unintentionally noticed a news that a 63 years old American father helps his handicapped son finsihing global travel. At first I was confused how could an old father manage such an impossible work.However I knew the answer from the father's firm eyes,which likes telling me"for father's love,everything is possible".
As we all know"Father love to be hill",Indeed father's love likes a mountain--deep and silent.Although father seldom speaks his love out, he always there when we need him.He likes a harbor when coming the storm,likes a handkerchief when weeping, likes a map when losing the way. He is our guardian angel.
Love our parents.Don't forget they already growing old while we too busy growing up.
1.是第二部分写作任务的
2.我是高三党,这25分作文一般只能得16分左右,帮帮挑一下语病还有提示一下该在哪方面提高吧.
3.宾语从句中的that能省略调吗?
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A boy who left home for years because his parents had quarrel and he left a letter says that I will come home if there is a white ribbon tied on the tree.Years past by,(maybe days past by?)there was a white ribbon tied on the tree and so the boy is home.
After reading this story,I felt the whole-hearted love of the boy’s parents,which makes me deeply moved?.Every child is a treasure in parent’s eyes; they easily forgive their child and can never lose them.Thus how could we hurt our parents?
Many days ago,I unintentionally noticed news that a 63 years old American father helped his handicapped son finished global travel.at the begining I was confused how could an old father manage such impossible work,but the father’s firm?eyes have told me that a father’s love makes everything possible.
As we know,Father’s love is like hill,indeed it’s more like a mountain- deep and silent.Even though father rarely talks about love,but he will be there when we needed.Fathers are like a harbor when storm coming;a handkerchief when we cry; a map when we got lost.He is our guardian angel.
Please love your parents because they are getting older while you are too busy growing up.
After reading this story,I felt the whole-hearted love of the boy’s parents,which makes me deeply moved?.Every child is a treasure in parent’s eyes; they easily forgive their child and can never lose them.Thus how could we hurt our parents?
Many days ago,I unintentionally noticed news that a 63 years old American father helped his handicapped son finished global travel.at the begining I was confused how could an old father manage such impossible work,but the father’s firm?eyes have told me that a father’s love makes everything possible.
As we know,Father’s love is like hill,indeed it’s more like a mountain- deep and silent.Even though father rarely talks about love,but he will be there when we needed.Fathers are like a harbor when storm coming;a handkerchief when we cry; a map when we got lost.He is our guardian angel.
Please love your parents because they are getting older while you are too busy growing up.
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