求英文达人改错I met my best friend Bean when I was waiting our firs

求英文达人改错
I met my best friend Bean when I was waiting our first class in my high school. At that time, the classroom was full of students, Bean came late, there is no seat is available. He was be ask to bring a chair and sat beside me in aisle. He looked me, I looked me, and then said a word each other “hello”
Bean’s hometown is a small village in a beautiful mouton. Once, we and the other classmates to go to his hometown to play together. We lived in woods of this mouton; we hunted during the daytime, cooked prey at night. This experience is very interesting for me! I can forget it forever.
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I met my best friend Bean when I was waiting our first class in my high school.At that time,the classroom was full of students.Bean came late,there was no available seat.He was askedto bring a chair and sat beside me in the aisle.Helooked at me,and then i looked at him and said "hello" each other.Bean's hometown is a small village in a beautiful mountain.Once a time,our classmates and i went to his hometown to play.We lived in the woods of this mountain;We hunted during the daytime,then cooked the prey in the evening.this experience is very interesting!I can't forget it forever.

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I met my best friend Bean when I was waiting for our first class in my high school. At that time, the classroom was full of students, Bean came late and there was no seat available. He was asked to br...

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