英语作文评析,三级水平, 正文如下,请指出错误,评改有道理的追加,谢谢

英语作文评析,三级水平, 正文如下,请指出错误,评改有道理的追加,谢谢
Waiter Wanted
Restaurant Address: 18.Center Street, Fifth Avenue
Do you want to work late? Do you work hard? Do you like to meet people or help people with food? If your answer is “Yes”, then we have a job for you at Rose Restaurant as a waiter. Please call Jim Allan Smith at 138******** or 828****.
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Water Position Available Now!(Rose Restaurant)
Address:18.Center Street,Fifth Avenue
We are looking for hard working,easy going and enthuthism guys to join our team and serve our customers.And we hope our new staff can work until late.If you are interest in this position please for free to contract us
Contract information:
Allan Smith,Cell:138*** Phone:
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