以my dream home为题写一篇短文.

My dream home is a house near a lake.My dream house has three floors.On the first floor,there are a big sitting room and a toilet.On the second floor,there's a clean dining room,we have meals in it.My family has three people.Our bedrooms are on the third floor.Behind my house,there's a beautiful garden and a large simming pool.Oh,I hope to have a house like this some day. 如何，给分吧！！！！