帮我写一篇关于沈阳旅游景点的英文小故事（5句到8句） 急

one day,i went to Shenyang Imperial Palace for traveling.In the palace,I came across a lot of foreigners.One of them was looking for a toilet anxiously.Since I have learned English knowledge,so I went up to help him.Even though I could not speak English so well,but that experience really made me proud!So from then on,I made up my mind to learn English harder!I can,I believe!
某日,我去沈阳故宫旅游.在那里,我遇到了很多外国人.他们其中的一个很着急地在找厕所.由于我也学过一些英语,所以就主动上去帮忙.尽管我的英语说的不是太好,但那次经历真的让我感到骄傲!所以,从那次以后,我下定决心要更努力的学习英语!我相信,我可以!
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