帮我看看我写的英语句子有语法错吗?

designed 和 released是过去分词；ranking 是现在分词 都是非谓语动词,单独不作谓语.句子缺少谓语
Angry Birds,( was ) designed by Jackke Lisalo and released ( in )December,2009,ranking the first of the most popular games in Apple Store.
Or
Angry Birds,designed by Jackke Lisalo and released in December,2009,ranks the first of the most popular games in Apple Store.

ranking the first ... 语法不对。
建议这样改（并简洁化）：
Angry Birds, designed by Jackke Lisalo and released on December, 2009, ranks as Apple's most popular game.

这个句子没有谓语
Angry Birds,designed by Jackke Lisalo and released on December,2009,is ranking the first of the most popular games in Apple Store.