我想找人帮我改一篇英语托福的文章（第二篇）

我想找人帮我改一篇英语托福的文章（第二篇）
我学了托福一个月,自己的水平还不够好.
我不怕犯错,希望友友们可以帮我纠正一下,及时改过来.
As an old saying,“ Parents are the best teachers.”For it,different people has different opinion.Some people consider only the school teacher who has lots of knowledge can become children`s ture teacher.But they are not aware that everyting bout themselves have permeated into their children unconsciously.
As far as I am concerned,the saying is really ture.
To begin with,parents are the most close person for children so that they can affect children from their children were born.The words,the behavior,the appearance and everything they do in the daily life all may set an example to the children.As the time gone,the children will learn with imitation from their parents.To give an example,a girl who always see her mother being dutiful to grandmother is likely do the same thing to her mother.No one can give children so enduring and important influences ,but only their parents.
Moreover,parents can tell them a lot of knowledge in many respects to their children.Although not every parent is with high diploma.,but for young children,they also can be excellent teacher depends on their previous knowledge and experience.Some parents can tell their children story,knowledge or teach them sing song and so on.The children will be easier to absorb them from their parents than other people.From that,the basic knowledge will be cumulated in children`s brain.Therefore,it is obvious that parents are the best teacher for their children.
Last but not least,parents can help children to find their own way.Facing parents,most people are willing to speak their happiness and sadness.They also can ask a favor from parents when they feel that they lose their way.Parents are going to give a hand to children at any time.Sometimes,the children want their parent give them some advice to solve difficulties.After they talk with parents,the puzzle in their mind may disappear at once.That is an other reason why parents are the best teacher for their children.
In conclusion,it can be said that no one is more suitable than parents to be best teacher.No matter their love or their responsibility,they all can do a favor to their children,and to be their best teacher.