小女字求英文高手帮忙找下语病,各位大虾```以下是我写的辞职信``因为对自己的英文水平不是很自信``请帮忙找下有什麼语病

小女字求英文高手帮忙找下语病,
各位大虾```以下是我写的辞职信``因为对自己的英文水平不是很自信``请帮忙找下有什麼语病```帮忙修改下``小女子感激不敬
Dear All ,
Hope you are well
Sorry to say good-bye to everybody ,I will leave the company on 20th June .
It's my pleasure to thank you for all your support and love to me during the passed more than 2 years ,I feel so grateful to have had the chance to work with you and get to know so many of you.,and I do thank you very much to give me the opportunity to grow up
Now the company will direct cooperation with customer ,hope the company have a very successful future ,I reget the loss of this job ,but for me ,if something lost,there must be other thing won,also I was still young and there are many other things waiting for me to learn ,I want to go back to my hometown to do my own things ,I believe you can kindly understande
Say thanks again for your great help
Ms Green will take over my job in the future,please send all the relattion informations to her directly .
I wish you and your families a full life of good health and happiness always.And I will miss you all so much
If you are free,please keep in touch with me as belowing informations :
Tel :
Best Regards ,
Mabel