关于大学生英文演讲稿.给出的题目是Being myself is my top concern,写完了觉得还有点少.想加

关于大学生英文演讲稿.
给出的题目是Being myself is my top concern,写完了觉得还有点少.想加点儿例子什么的,最主要是能打动人就行.原文如下
Being myself is my top concern
If there were a diamond and an irregular stone .Which one do you wanna be?Diamond? Good,at least it's more expensive~
Actually,this is what my Grandfather asked me before I head to college one year ago, I chose to be a diamond immediately 'cause I thought that would be sharp.But he just smiled and said:"That's your own choice,none of my business."
When I stepped into my college,just as what I chose.I tried my best to be a diamond.Walking through the campus with my guitar,taking part in all kinds of Concerts and so on.I did all I could to make myself sharp enough.And It lasted for almost a year.I was full of energy at the beginning,but later on,I started to feel tired.I just realized that I was trying to be someone else,not myself.
So I began to come back down to earth and Tried to be a normal but original stone.And things are going well till now.
From people’s perspective,diamond is charming and stone is ugly. But actually,diamonds are in one same shape while stones have countless lookings.and stones stand steadily in spite of any factors. That's the highlight. We, human beings, should learn to be like a stone with edge and corners. We should keep our own character, be consistent and always stay true to ourselves.
I called my grandfather several days earlier and told him my choice to be a stone.He just said the same words:"That's your own choice,none of my business."
老师给的意见是再加入以下几个点：1.能说明为什么感觉tired的例子
2.要体现出I‘m showing myself not being myself.
3.要用例子说明在show的过程当中lost了一些东西
4.要体现出being is the basic of showing.
长度的话 控制在三分钟之内,就在原文基础上改.不要改变原文的意思就可以了.改好发到我邮箱里就哦了.谢谢大家.我邮箱是Naivee@yeah.net.