英语翻译您好 我是贵校录取的新生.申请时填的地址也许不太准确 为了确保能够收到录取通知书 我的详细地址如下:.

下面是我一般用的写信格式,和给你翻译的句子,你把你的信息填进去就可以啦~
Hi there,
My name is xxx,my student number is xxx,I've enrolled as a new student of your school.The address I filled in application might not be accurate enough,in order to make sure that I could get the offer of enrolment in time,my accurate address is as following:xxxx
All the best,
xxxxx