英文改错After a day of work,the body needs have a rest.Sleep is

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After a day of work,the body needs have a rest.Sleep is necessary for good heaithy.The rest you get while sleeping make your body able to prepare itself the next day.There are four levels of sleep.Each is a little deep than the one before .As you sleep,your body relaxes.Your heart beats more slow and your brain slows down.If you have trouble falling sleep,some people suggest breathing slowly and deeply and the other people believe drink warm milk will help you sleep well.Will you try them both?
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isuperyaya 幼苗

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1.needs to have a rest
2....for good health.
3.makes your body.
4.for the next day.
5.a little deeper
6.the one before改成the previous one
7.more slowly
8.falling asleep
9.other people (去掉前面的the)
10.drinking warm milk
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After a day's work, the body needs to have a rest.Sleep is necessary for good healthy.The rest you get while sleeping makes your body able to prepare itself for the next day.There are four l...

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123god 幼苗

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After a day of work, the body needs(to) have a rest.Sleep(改为Sleeping) is necessary for good heaithy(改为health).The rest you get while sleeping make(makes) your body able to prepare itself the next day....

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After a day of work, the body needs 【to】have a rest.Sleep is necessary for good 【health】.The rest you get while sleeping 【makes】 your body able to prepare itself 【for】the next day.There are four level...

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