求帮忙改小段 英语语法A part of the scene was showing the removal of a

求帮忙改小段 英语语法
A part of the scene was showing the removal of a victim women’s face
in horrible detail that cause some audience members had fainted during the film
screenings at the Edinburgh Film Festival,Franju’s apparent response hearing thatwas "Now I know why Scotsmen wear skirts."
改下英语语法就好了..
a little bloody and "disgusting" scenes is somehow special of the film
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lanzi_o1 花朵

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A part of the scene was showing the removal of a victim (women’s -- 单数应该是woman's) face
in horrible detail that ( cause -- 过去时caused) some audience members ( had fainted - 应改为 to fain 因为句型是 cause sb.to so sth) during the film
screenings at the Edinburgh Film Festival(,改句号.) Franju’s apparent response (hearing that -- 改为to the news ) was "Now I know why Scotsmen wear skirts."

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a little bloody and "disgusting" scenes is somehow special of the film 这个呢 谢谢了

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a little bloody and "disgusting" (scenes) is somehow special of the film 同样a = scene 不能用复数
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