想请英语老师帮忙看一下,这段话有没有什么不对的地方?200分!
想请英语老师帮忙看一下,这段话有没有什么不对的地方?200分!
（这是书信类的作文,XX表示需要自己填写的部分)
有需要改正的地方吗?
To begin,please give me particular accounts as regards your views on XX .In addition,I wonder if a XX contest should be held in the library on Sunday next week.And,I wonder if it is convenient for you to participate in this XX contest.And if there are any other questions,please let me know.
（这是书信类的作文,XX表示需要自己填写的部分)
有需要改正的地方吗?
To begin,please give me particular accounts as regards your views on XX .In addition,I wonder if a XX contest should be held in the library on Sunday next week.And,I wonder if it is convenient for you to participate in this XX contest.And if there are any other questions,please let me know.
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Firstly, please give me some advice on XX.About the XX contest next Sunday, I'm not sure if it should be held in the library. And I'm wondering if you will have time to come to participate the contest. if you have any other questions, please feel free to contact me.
觉得这个好像不是很正式的信啊, 有点像email的性质. 而且文句意思的连接上总好像漏了什么一样.
觉得这个好像不是很正式的信啊, 有点像email的性质. 而且文句意思的连接上总好像漏了什么一样.
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ڶ䣬 I'm wondering if the contest next Sunday will be held in the library and if you will have time to participate in this contest. ʵ ҾøҲͲfirstly Ϊͷģ Ҳ Ϊ˵ /ʼҲʲôһڶ⡣
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请帮忙看一下这段话有没有英语语法上的错误,如果有,请指出并改正,
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你能帮帮他们吗