Only when I try to be a valuable person,can others feel my value then.While XX Middle School is the first step to realize my dream.(实现梦想:realize my dream; 梦想实现了:my dream comes true; Only+句子部分倒装表强调 )
If you want to be valued by others, you should firstly try to be a valuable person. And to be admitted to xx middle school is the first step for me to realise my dream.
Only make yourself a valuable man can make others feel your value ,and XX Middle School is just my first stop to achieve my dream. 用到了only引导的倒装句,主句的主谓倒装 谢谢
Only after I myself became a talent with ture value will I be able to let others realize it,as XX high school will become the first step for me to make my dream come ture.