SAT OC语法题By including pieces of cloth,newspaper,wallpaper,an

SAT OC语法题
By including pieces of cloth,newspaper,wallpaper,and other materials in his work,
Picasso’s innovation had an important influence on twentieth-century art.
(A) Picasso’s innovation had an important influence on
(B) this innovation of Picasso’s was important in its influence over
(C) Picasso’s important innovative influence was on
(D) Picasso was influential,with his innovation,over
(E) the innovative Picasso was an important influence on
但是我不太理解D为什么不对
Explanation for Incorrect Answer D :
Choice (D) exhibits awkward phrasing.It is strange to say that Picasso was
"influential,with his innovation,over twentieth-century art."
那请问这句话的语法有没有错啊...假如没有E的话能选D吗.