英文 自我介绍自己写了篇段的 找高手帮我看看 大小写就别跟我说了my name isXXX.I am graduate

英文 自我介绍
自己写了篇段的 找高手帮我看看 大小写就别跟我说了
my name isXXX.I am graduate from XXXX,major in Electronic Commerce.I don't have a job but it's merely provisional,I will be woke soon and I wish my English could be improved befor.Despite I learnd English for a long time but have not noticeable improvement.so I feel I dislike English,the other cause I am a rather private person indolent in language
I am a nanjing native and life with my parents In my spare time,I love reading to novels,listening to music and playing the online game.whatever I do ,I prefer to stay at home rather than go outside
I hope that I could pass the test of General English Proficiency Test to prove my ability .I am happy to learn with everybody .thank you