学校即将举行以"Music and My Life"为主题的英语作文比赛,请按下列要求写一篇词数100-120左右的作文

学校即将举行以"Music and My Life"为主题的英语作文比赛,请按下列要求写一篇词数100-120左右的作文。内容需包括:
我喜欢的音乐类型
最喜欢在什么时候听音乐
音乐带给了我什么
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I like music and I think most people like it as much as I do. While most of people nowadays like modern music such as rock and pop music, I like listening to classical music. For many people, they find classical music boring to listen. However, I think classical music is serious and can make people inspired. Unlike modern music, most of the classical music can last long. Every time I feel tired or anxious, classical music helps me calm down. Music plays an important part in my life. Music makes my life more colorful and gives me a lot of entertainment. More importantly, it makes me refreshed. If there were no music in the world, it would really be a boring and dull place!




写作时认真审题,确定体裁。应注意以下几个方面。(1)时态错误:文章中忽视了动作发生的时间。(2)人称代词错误:单复数、形容词性物主代词与名词性物主代词错误。(3)名词单复数、动词单复数、主谓语不一致。(4)用词错误:对同义词的区别、使用场合、习惯用法不熟悉,或者忘记了单词。(5)内容不连贯:不会用关联词,语序混乱。没有统筹安排,写到哪里,就停在哪里。(6)大小写、标点符号错误,缺少冠词。(7)书写混乱,卷面潦草。

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点评: 好作文应该是紧扣文章主题,遵循特定的文体格式,选用恰当的语言合理组织文章结构,内容统一、连贯,语法、拼写、标点正确,用词恰当。为了避免太多单词拼写错误,语法错误,不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词,不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇,短语,句式。

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