我写的英语日记1 希望大家改正其中的错误!

我写的英语日记1 希望大家改正其中的错误!
today is sunday,and it is aslo mid-autumn festival!
i get up early this morning,i hope i can have a meaningful and wonderful day!
when i got up ,i quickly wash my face ,and finish breakfast ,
then i read english book,and surf the Internet
i hope ever one have a good mid-autumn festival!
就写这么多,一定有些地方不是习惯的用法
希望英语高手帮我指正
when i got up i quickly wash my face and finish breakfast
这句 好像有两个谓语
开心博 1年前 已收到5个回答 举报
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蓝色飞扬0611 种子

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修改的比较大,但是这样才是真正的表示方法
It's sunday today and is aslo the mid-autumn festival!I hope I have a meaningful and wonderful day today.
I got up very early this morning.I had my breakfast after I quickly washed my face .Then I started to read english book and surfe the Internet
I wish everyone has a fantastic mid-autumn festival!

1年前

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3ma6 幼苗

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and it is aslo mid-autumn festival！ 中秋节前少冠词 the
i quickly wash my face 语序不对 i wash my face quickly更地道
then i read english book少冠词 read an English book 或 read English books
internet要大写首字母In...

1年前

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bluerainew 幼苗

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日记是一天到最后的记事
所以，所写下的，大部分都是之前发生过的事
因此，要注意时态问题

1年前

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xiaxu520 幼苗

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1.when i got up ，i quickly wash my face ，and finish breakfast
把wash改成washed，把finish改成finished
2.i get up early this morning
把get改成got
3.then i read english book，and surf the Internet ...

1年前

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三人行2007 幼苗

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呵呵，同意呼ff的看法，作文的时候一定要注意时态，还有，中秋节应该是 mid- autumn day,而不是fetival，春节才应该是spring festival，另外，句首字母好像疏忽大写了~~
谢谢~~

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