用过去式写一篇上个星期天所干过的事,等着救命的

It was a sunny Sunday,my father and I went on an excursion.We took a bus and walked along the river.There's really a beautiful place!We walked beneath the deep bule sky and breathed the fresh air.And we climbed up the mountain,admired the beautiful sunlight brighten the land.
At noon,my father and I went to a restaurant which is my favourite and had a good lunch.We were so tired that we aet a lot.After a big meal,we went home by bus.The surroundings were beautiful,but I fell asleep after I got on the bus.What's pity!
This is a happy and funny Sunday.
这正是一个晴朗的日子,星期天.我爸爸和我去了远足.我们坐巴士去那里,然后沿着河行走.那里真是个美丽的地方啊!我们在湛蓝的天空下行走,呼吸着新鲜的空气.然后,我们爬上了一座山,看见阳光撒满了大地.
在下午,我爸爸带着我去了我平常最爱的餐厅吃饭.我们太累以至于吃了很多.吃完一顿大餐,我们坐巴士回家了.路上的风景很美,但我在上车不久就睡着了.真是可惜啊.
这是一个开心而且好玩的星期天.