wusuoshantou
幼苗
共回答了21个问题采纳率:95.2% 举报
第一行-of which 去掉,
第三行-desirable 换成appealing
第七行-promptly改成immediately
第九行-why it is growing so fast
第十行-not complicated 换成 simple
第十一行-so many online goods are cheaper than their price in traditional stores.
第十二行-same 去掉
第十三行-is 改成are,before 去掉
第十四行-the programs have increased which means that the security has increased.
第十五行-is去掉,ensure改成ensures
第十六行-your money will also be able to go back
第十八行-had 改成were
第二十一行-has 改成have
第二十二行-out去掉
第二十三行-site改成sites,be去掉
第二十四行-what 改成 all,sitting改成sit
最后一行-两个shop 改成shops
1年前
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