求小学五年级上册英语短文,50单词以上,重赏!

My Mother
I have a nice mother.She's tall and thin.She's active and smart.She's very stict.She favourite fruit is orange.She like English best.beef is she favourite.She play Ping-Pong,read books,watch TV,use a computer …on satdays and sundays.She helpful very much.She can sweep the floor,cook the meals….You love she?
决不是抄的,我亲手打的,单词数都给你数好了,58个.

My mother
My mother is nice.She's tall and thin.She has big eyes and small nose.She's funny.She's very strict.But she's very kind.She favourite day is Sunday,because she can watch TV,Monday to Sat...

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上面的,你打的有错:是"Saturdays",而不是"saturdays","S"要大写,"Sundays"也一样!!