据说有语病,帮个忙修改一下!Do you know how important you are to me?I`m so

据说有语病,帮个忙修改一下!
Do you know how important you are to me?
I`m so afraid of losing you.When i see the blue sky,i often think of you,i really want to stay with you,even walking is such a beautiful thing.
When i yearn you before sleeping,i always say good night to you.I hope you can happy,you can smile.
I know time is fearful.It can make everything become shallow,including our love?Of course ,if we love each other deeply,time is no problem.
But i don`t believe myself at all.I am afraid i can`t give you what you want.Is the small happiness belong to us?
I tell myself,i can`t give up.I am earnest to you.
I only want to tell you a ward.I miss you,i can`t miss you.My honey
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lfcb 幼苗

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When i see the blue sky,i often think of you,i really want to stay with you,even walking is such a beautiful thing.在英语中逗号是不能代替连词的(分号可以),这个句子中每个独立句子中间都是用逗号,所以不正确.同理I hope you can happy,you can smile.
time is no problem改为time is not a problem.
.Is the small happiness belong to us?此句中is 改为dose
一点拙见,有什么不会的再来问我好啦

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V火舞九天V 幼苗

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夏休みの计画 もう夏です。夏休みが近づいてきました。子供时の夏休みは面白かったです。あの时、宿题はあんまり多くなかったですから、毎日

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