这篇小学生的英文自我简介有错误吗?
这篇小学生的英文自我简介有错误吗?
Hello,Good morning everyone.I'm very happy to stand here to introduce myself. My name is Dong ru wei,I am11years old.I am in class7,Grade6.My favourite colour is green.because I think green is quite clear for us. At school,l like English best,perhaps some people think it is difficult to learn.but l like it ,l believe if you do their best to do,nothing can be down well.l also like sports such as running,climbing mountains and going hiking. l am very happy to help others,if you need help ,please come to me.l hope we can be come good friends. I want to be a scientist one day,so l study hard.l believe No pain,No gain.This is me,a sunshine girl.Thanks for your listening.