英语作文改错This summer,I was lucky to have joined an archaeology

英语作文改错
This summer,I was lucky to have joined an archaeology summer camp,which lasted ten
days.During the summer camp,we visited several museums which many valuable cultural relics
were displayed.Even more excited,we got a chance to go to an archaeological site.It was the
first time that we had been very close to ancient civilization that I could witness how the digging
was carried out.The speeches were made by famous archaeologists informed us on much
knowledge about this field.Besides,I make many friend
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flqn2723 幼苗

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This summer,I was lucky to have joined(→join) an archaeology summer camp,which lasted for ten days.During the summer camp,we visited several museums which(→where) many valuable cultural relics
were displayed.Even more excited(→exciting),we got a chance to go to an archaeological site.It was the first time that we had(→have) been very close to ancient civilization and that I could witness how the digging was carried out.The speeches were made by famous archaeologists who informed us on(→of) much knowledge about this field.Besides,I make(→made) many friend(→friends)

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xboyraul 幼苗

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第一个错误:to have joined 改 to join第二个错误which many valuable改 in which many valuable第三个错误:excited 改exciting第四个错误:to 后加such第五个错误:去掉were made 中的were第六个错误:on much改of much第七个:make改made

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