英语作文改错The most important object in my life is my lovely dog,

我不知道你是想该语法和词汇上的错还是作文写得太一般,不够凝练,我帮你改一下顺便加工一点,但没改变主体,你看看.
The most important object in my life is my lovely dog whose name is Panada and I really love him.He is my best friend for the reason that when my parents aren't at home ,he always plays with me,in which case,I feel less lonely.In addition,he is so cute that all my friend think it is beautiful and lovely,looking like a cute bear.He is also obedient.For example,when I am sleeping,he never makes any noise.When I get him stood,he is standing until I say “stop”.Not only I love him for these reasons,bu also it is my ninth birthday gift getting from my parents.I love them,so I love it too.I can’t leave it and I will love it forever.

The most important object in my life is my lovely dog, panada. I really love it.
It is my best friend, when my parents can’t be at home. It plays with me. It makes me less lonely.
It is so...

The most important object of my life is my lovely dog, panada. I really love it.
你想说的是你的人生的目标是一只狗吗？这句话有歧义。一般英语很少吧狗作为物体来看待，最好是换成him。One of the most important part of my life is my lovely dog, panad...

The most important object in my life is my lovely dog, panada. I really love it.
It is my best friend, when my parents can’t be at home. It plays with me. It makes me less lonely.
It is so...