初二水平英文作文,有要求写两篇,在线等 速度啊 谢谢各位

Should parent spend more time with their children?
In recent times with the great changes of our society, so parents are often working without much time to accompany their children; in any case, I think children should need parent’s love not only in physical but also in mental.
Firstly, as the young, we have spent the childhood and the adolescence, we must know about that it is necessary that parent should spend more time with their children for children’s growth healthily. After work, if parents spend more time with children, they would get along well with children and make family peaceful and happy. Secondly, it is also the duty of parents to take good care of children, especially the little child; if parents are always working, children may fell lonely and even twist their mind to become bad, and this is so harmful for our future flowers. Thirdly, as the saying goes, “kill two birds with one stone.” When parents with children go out for entertaining, they can get relaxed from the weariness of work and also make their children fell happy.
No matter how busy parents are, they should spend time with their children even if they just have little time; it is not just for children’s growth healthily but also for parents themselves, we should appeal to these parents to spend more time with their children.
我不知道是否还符合初二,凑合吧?WRITEN BY MYSELF.