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The reasons why I want to go to Queen’s university are its competitive environment,experienced professors,friendly students,advanced facilities and culture.If I could successfully be enrolled,I will cherish and take advantage of this precious opportunity.Firstly,I will be actively participate in various activities that I am interested in.Despite the fact that I may be unfamiliar with some sort of actvities,I will try to get involved in.By participating activies,I will be able to make new friends and improve myself.In addition,studying in Queen’s is definitely a chance I must cherish.To be a surgeon is my dream all the way through my life.I can obtain a sense of value when my patients recovered.Moreover,I am going to find a part-time job to support my school fee.It could be washing dishes or playing drums in pubs.Anyway,it is necessary to reduce the economic pressure of my family.
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