这是我自己写的作文,应该有不少语法错误,请各位为大虾帮我批改一下,非常感激!

这是我自己写的作文,应该有不少语法错误,请各位为大虾帮我批改一下,非常感激!
Dear Xiaodong,
Thanks for you support, I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice .Here are some tips to help you:
First, why not tell you your classmate you interest? If you do that you can have many friends that your have same interest.
Secondly, if you find your classmate’s interest, you should to tell you know.
Thirdly, don't be afraid of makes friends.
Don’t forget we are friends now!
I hope you find these ideas useful.
Yours,
Miss Wang
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jalyca0510 幼苗

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Dear Xiaodong,
Thanks for your support!I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble in making friends at present.However,the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help you.
Firstly,why not show your classmates your interest?If you do so,you will have many friends in common interest with you.
Secondly,if you find your classmates' interest,you should go to them and share what you get.
Thirdly,don't be afraid of making friends.
Don't forget we are friends now!I hope you will find these ideas useful!
Yours,
Miss Wang

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hrb888 幼苗

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几个you -your
some interest- +s
暂时那么些

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vbill 幼苗

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你这个英语写的很不错，无需修改

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千金kk心 幼苗

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the situation is easy to change...应改成
it is easy to change the situation
situation不可直接用easy 来形容
用it虚指，纯是句式需要。it无义。
不可easy 开首：easy to change the situation
唯有虚指：it is easy to change ...

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fvghg 幼苗

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Thanks for YOUR support /First why not tell your classmate WHAT YOU ARE INTERESTED IN /you should TELL THEM YOU KNOW ABOUT THEM /do not be afraid OF MAKING FRIENDS /I hope you WILL find大写的是你错的 用/隔着了

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