急,跪求英语作文,最好要自己写的,不要用汉语译过来的啊!
急,跪求英语作文,最好要自己写的,不要用汉语译过来的啊!
假设你是李华,你的朋友Jenny向你询问如何保持健康.请你给她发一封邮件提些建议.内容要点如下：
1. 注意合理饮食.多吃鱼、肉、豆类等,特别是新鲜蔬菜和水果,不要吃太多甜食.
2. 注意锻炼身体.劳逸结合,多参加体育活动.
3. 保证充足的睡眠.不要熬夜,每天至少睡8个小时.
注意：1. 词数；100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件的开头已为你写好
Dear Jenny,
How nice to hear form you ! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy...
审题谋篇
1. 时态: 一般现在时
2. 人称: 第二人称
3. 结构:首先说明写这封邮件的目的,然后就如何保持健康提出建议,最后一句话总结.
假设你是李华,你的朋友Jenny向你询问如何保持健康.请你给她发一封邮件提些建议.内容要点如下：
1. 注意合理饮食.多吃鱼、肉、豆类等,特别是新鲜蔬菜和水果,不要吃太多甜食.
2. 注意锻炼身体.劳逸结合,多参加体育活动.
3. 保证充足的睡眠.不要熬夜,每天至少睡8个小时.
注意：1. 词数；100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件的开头已为你写好
Dear Jenny,
How nice to hear form you ! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy...
审题谋篇
1. 时态: 一般现在时
2. 人称: 第二人称
3. 结构:首先说明写这封邮件的目的,然后就如何保持健康提出建议,最后一句话总结.
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Dear Jenny,
How nice to hear form you !In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy...
on my opinion ,we must keept three life style so as we to stay on health
first of all,we must take care of our eating habit .fish meat beans and so on is
good for our health ,especilly fresh vegetables and fruits did ,but much sweet is bad for it;
then we must keep tainning on our body,study with a rest and take some more gymnastics
is also contribute much to our body.
At last we must have a good sleep eveyday,do not stay all night and keep a sleep time at least 8 hours one night !
that‘s the way i keept healthy ,have you a try may you have a good health !
best wishes to you
your‘s friend Li Hua
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How nice to hear form you !In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy...
on my opinion ,we must keept three life style so as we to stay on health
first of all,we must take care of our eating habit .fish meat beans and so on is
good for our health ,especilly fresh vegetables and fruits did ,but much sweet is bad for it;
then we must keep tainning on our body,study with a rest and take some more gymnastics
is also contribute much to our body.
At last we must have a good sleep eveyday,do not stay all night and keep a sleep time at least 8 hours one night !
that‘s the way i keept healthy ,have you a try may you have a good health !
best wishes to you
your‘s friend Li Hua
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