这句英语有没有错误呢?The journalist advocating participatory democracy
这句英语有没有错误呢?
The journalist advocating participatory democracy in all phases of life,whose own children are enrolled in private schools.翻译是“倡导终身参与民主制的新闻记者却把自己的子女送进私立学校.” 简化起来:The journalist whose own children are enrolled in private schools.这句话对吗?